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Marsha Sheley's avatar

Wow!!! So exciting!!! I’m anxiously waiting for the rest of the story!!! Loved the narration!!! Great job!

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Magnificent descriptions of the scenery! Makes me want to see it for myself 🪐

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Eric Falden's avatar

Well done showing us Chucks character with the roll prior to the problem arising. Fun little read 🛩️🪐

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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Well done, David. Great VO! Really takes us there with Chuck.

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Rob Mortell's avatar

Great story, really liking this format and your narration style. Good work!

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