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Renee Hale's avatar

I really like how this complements the Jetpack story. I know it was a side story, but I could see it being a cool beginning to a dual perspective narrative. It would be interesting to follow the two perspectives back and forth until they (hopefully) meet up.

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Sarah G. Young's avatar

Nice story! I liked the fantastical elements and could feel the excitement.

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