I really like how this complements the Jetpack story. I know it was a side story, but I could see it being a cool beginning to a dual perspective narrative. It would be interesting to follow the two perspectives back and forth until they (hopefully) meet up.
So is this more Jetpack or what?
Nice story! I liked the fantastical elements and could feel the excitement.
I really like how this complements the Jetpack story. I know it was a side story, but I could see it being a cool beginning to a dual perspective narrative. It would be interesting to follow the two perspectives back and forth until they (hopefully) meet up.